http://huldrejenta.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] huldrejenta.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] rt_morelove 2014-12-20 10:30 pm (UTC)

Oh, this was lovely!
I love Andromeda's voice here, and it's fascinating the way she and Ted compliment each other. Andromeda is very wise and observant, and her worries are very natural and real. I love how you describe what she sees during their dinner.

This was not a man who knew quite what to do with being so completely loved.
Ah, very beautifully put!

Great work!

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