gilpin25: (Horseandcarriage)
gilpin25 ([personal profile] gilpin25) wrote in [community profile] rt_morelove 2018-02-04 05:10 pm (UTC)

Oh my, that last line is really painful! I like how you've used the repetition of "kiss" to lead into it. The "doesn't now and never will again" is hard-hitting too, and terribly sad. Well done - so glad you wrote here again. :-)

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