I love how it all starts very idyllic with the nice details about the picnic blanket and the bees and the songbirds. And then Tonks' comment about the black dog who'd love to be out here, tells us there's something else going on here. Remus is heartbreaking, but I love that you've added humour here as well - “Quick Quotes Quill. They take a bit of poetic license with details, but they're not useless. I've stripped off the Sensationalus and Melodramaticus charms, mostly, so I think it might actually take straight-forward notes for us.” That made me laugh out loud :)
The Quick Quotes Quill was a very nice touch, and the way it shows us so much. I do wonder what Tonks thinks when she reads 'That's very clever of you,' said the mild-mannered werewolf, carefully concealing his emotions under a façade of Platonic affection.
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Date: 2014-05-08 09:02 am (UTC)I love how it all starts very idyllic with the nice details about the picnic blanket and the bees and the songbirds. And then Tonks' comment about the black dog who'd love to be out here, tells us there's something else going on here. Remus is heartbreaking, but I love that you've added humour here as well -
“Quick Quotes Quill. They take a bit of poetic license with details, but they're not useless. I've stripped off the Sensationalus and Melodramaticus charms, mostly, so I think it might actually take straight-forward notes for us.” That made me laugh out loud :)
The Quick Quotes Quill was a very nice touch, and the way it shows us so much. I do wonder what Tonks thinks when she reads 'That's very clever of you,' said the mild-mannered werewolf, carefully concealing his emotions under a façade of Platonic affection.
Lovely work!