I read this when it first appeared but didn't get a chance to comment, so here goes.
Firstly, I literally bobbed up and down in my chair at the thought of Remus wanting to show Teddy off. It felt so right, so beautiful that he'd want to do that, and I'm not surprised she's worried about him going back to being his old worried fearful self.
That last scene about being grateful, is so powerful, imagining Remus's voice fierce in tone, but over something so important to him actually made my knees weak, I love how you portray him and all of his "moods" or stages.
I'm just going to end up wanting to draw from all of your stories aren't I? :) You totally have me fooled this is canon most of the time (both with Warp and Weft and Kaleidoscope.
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Date: 2014-05-20 04:27 am (UTC)Firstly, I literally bobbed up and down in my chair at the thought of Remus wanting to show Teddy off. It felt so right, so beautiful that he'd want to do that, and I'm not surprised she's worried about him going back to being his old worried fearful self.
That last scene about being grateful, is so powerful, imagining Remus's voice fierce in tone, but over something so important to him actually made my knees weak, I love how you portray him and all of his "moods" or stages.
I'm just going to end up wanting to draw from all of your stories aren't I? :) You totally have me fooled this is canon most of the time (both with Warp and Weft and Kaleidoscope.
Thank you so much for sharing :)